考研英语作文简析
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小作文
已考类型 | 未考类型 |
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辞职信1次, 询问信1次, 建议信4次、 道歉信1次、 告示2次、 推荐信1次、 邀请信1次、通知信1次 | 感谢信,祝贺信,慰问信,申请信,投诉信,介绍信,请求信 |
作文范文
(2020年真题-Notice)
The student union of your university has assigned you to inform the international students about an upcoming singing contest.
Write a notice in about 100 words.
Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your own name in the notice.(10 points)
[参考范文]
Notice
Dec.21, 2019
In order to enrich the campus life and provide the colorful life for you,the Students’ Union is preparing the upcoming singing contest, which will be held in the auditorium in our university on the evening of December 31, 2019. Now, the Union is recruiting contestants for this competition.
Anyone who are fond of signing or interested in the competition, please send his or her application to students’ union @ sohu.com before next Wednesday.Besides,there are generous awards in gratitude for this activity.Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any queries concerming the singing contest. Meanwhile, volunteers for this activity are badly needed to assist us in organizing the relevant affairs.
We are looking forward to your participation.
The Students’ Union
【参考译文】
通知
2019年12月21日
为了丰富校园生活,为大家提供丰富多彩的生活,学生会正在筹备即将于2019年12月31日晚在我校大礼堂举行的歌唱比赛。现在,学生会正在为这次比赛招募选手。
有意报名或有意报名的同学请于下周三之前将报名表发送至学生会@sohu.com.此外,本次活动还设有丰厚的奖励。如果您对歌唱比赛有任何疑问,请随时与我们联系。同时,我们也非常需要这次活动的志愿者来协助我们组织相关的事务。
我们期待您的参与。
学生会
(2019真题-答复信)
Directions:
Suppose you are working for the “Aiding Rural Primary Schools” project of your university. Write an email to answer the inquiring from an international student volunteer. Specify the details of the project.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your own name in the e-mail. Use “Li Ming” instead. (10 points.)
一. 审题
要求考生作为一个“帮助农村学校项目”的成员之一,给一个来咨询该项目的国际学生志愿者写一封回信。具体说明这个项目的细节。根据题目中给出的信息确定写信对象是给一个国际留学生(an international student volunteer)写一封回信,写信的目的是介绍说明这个项目的细节(Specify the details of the project)。这是一个要求写一封咨询信的回信,但是咨询的具体内容又没有告诉你。所以很多考生觉得不知道从何下手。
二. 谋篇布局
其实这种书信仍然可以从熟悉的三段论着手。可以分为三段展开:第一段,表达对收到信之后的开心,然后进入主题,开门见山地提出写作目的:告诉你一些关于这个项目的必要细节。第二段,写这个项目的主题是帮助遥远地区的学校,会安排一些活动,比如送书等。然后再写一些对志愿者的要求。第三段,如果他还有其他问题,希望他能及时联系。
三. 素材套用成文
在写的过程中,完全可以套用海文老师在冲刺课上给大家储备的小作文必备素材句中找打熟悉的表达和句型来应用。例如,这种回信类型的文章,开头第一段就可以写I am exceedingly delighted to receive your letter in which you inquired something about the “Aiding Rural Primary Schools”. I, as a member of the project, am writing you this letter for the purpose of informing you some of the necessary information about the project.第二段主要介绍项目的必要细节,那么我们根据冲刺课和强化课屡次强调过的活动安排的角度来写。写此项目的主题,此项目的活动细节安排,例如:First and foremost, the theme of the project is to help those rural primary schools in remote areas by arranging some activities, such as sending various kinds of books about different aspects to those lovely students, which can not only broaden their horizon and enrich their life, but also cultivate their ability of thinking and learning independently and critically.此外,既然这个国际学生是想当志愿者,那么我们可以提志愿者的具体要求,用课堂上屡次用到的人物介绍:the volunteers should have the character of diligence, coupled with an optimistic and pleasant personality, which will assure them of positive attitude when facing some setbacks during the process of these activities.第三段在写的时候,因为是别人向你咨询,所以你的回复可能没有满足他的需求,所以用通知类的结尾模板:If you have any question about this project, please contact me without any hesitation at aidingruralprimaryschools@edu.cn.
【参考范文】
Dear William,
I am exceedingly delighted to receive your letter in which you inquired something about the “Aiding Rural Primary Schools”. I, as a member of the project, am writing you this letter for the purpose of informing you some of the necessary information.
First and foremost, the theme of the project is to help those rural primary schools in remote areas by arranging some activities, such as sending various kinds of books about different aspects to those lovely students, which can not only broaden their horizon and enrich their life, but also cultivate their ability of thinking and learning independently and critically. In addition, the volunteers should have the character of diligence, coupled with an optimistic and pleasant personality, which will assure them of positive attitude when facing some setbacks during the process of these activities.
If you have any question about this project, please contact me without any hesitation at aidingruralprimaryschools@edu.cn.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(2017真题-推荐信)
Directions:
You are to write an email to James Cook, a newly-arrived Australian professor, recommending some tourist attractions in your city. Please give reasons for your recommendation.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the email. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
【参考范文】
Dear James Cook,
Welcome to China! I’m writing this email to recommend some scenic spots in Beijing to you so that you can have a wonderful time here.
First of all, you could have a visit to the Summer Palace and Forbidden City, which are renowned for its old buildings and diverse cultures. After that, it is advisable to go to Wang Fujing, where you can have a taste of some delicious local food while enjoying the traditional culture. Finally, you can go to the National Museum, in which some traditional art exhibitions are being held. What do you think of my plans?
I sincerely hope that you could enjoy yourselves in Beijing and it will be my pleasure to be your guide.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(2014真题-建议信)
Directions:
Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address.(10 points)
2014英语一小作文真题解析
今年小作文不出预料,再一次考到了建议信。在我们英语一的考试当中,建议信已经反复考过三次,分别是2007年,2009年和2012年。因此,考生要高度重视历年真题,因为考过的话题或是书信类型会反复考查。今年考题的Direction要求就学校课程给校长提建议。根据题目的要求,我们可以判断本文为公务信函,语域为正式语域,即不能出现缩写、省略问句和和口语表达。
称呼: Dear Mr. President,注意称呼中,所有实词首字母全部大写,Dear Mr. President后面的逗号不可丢,也不能写成冒号。
正文
第一段:写作内容需涵盖两点:写信目的,表明建议;赞扬在前,建议在后。文章开头开门见山的表明了写信目的,用到了这样的表达It is my great honor to write to you. 第二句赞扬在前,建议在后。文中用到了这样的表达As far as I am concerned, we have enough extraordinary lectures and what we need now is physical exercise.
第二段: 写作内容为建议细节。首先,希望学校能够安排更多的体育课程;其次,希望学校能够制定固定的时间表来保证课外活动的时间。再次,希望全体教员也能参与其中。
第三段:写作内容为寄予期待,表示感谢。注意语气真挚礼貌。
落款: Yours sincerely, 特别提醒sincerely后面逗号不能丢;
签名: Li Ming 特别注意 Ming 后面一定不能出现句点。
参考范文如下:
Dear Mr. President,
It is my great honor to write to you. As far as I am concerned, we have enough extraordinary lectures and what we need now is physical exercise.
Since most of the time is spent in watching TV and playing computer games, our physical conditions are not good enough. i still have some suggestions for you. To begin with, our university should arrange more PE classes. To continue, we should have a fixed schedule for a certain time of outdoor activity. What is more, teaching faculty should be involved in the same kind of physical exercise.
I hope that our university could take the responsibility for our students’ physical health. I will be highly grateful if you could take my suggestions into account.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(2013真题-邀请信)
Directions:
Write an e-mail of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college, inviting him/her to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the e-mail. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
Section IV Writing
【参考范文】
Dear Prof. Smith,
On behalf of Students’ Union, I am writing this letter to invite you to be a judge for the speech contest which will be held in Students’ Union Hall on Monday, January 21.
As an internationally acclaimed scholar in English language and culture, your participation will bring us the pleasure. What’s more, since you have been teaching for a long time and you enjoy a great popularity among all teachers and students, we firmly believe that you can offer us valuable suggestions on improving our students’ oral and writing abilities.
It would be a great honor if you could accept this invitation. We are looking forward to your favorable early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
不常见类型模板
1.辞职信(1次)
Directions:
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address.
题目所给的规定情景是两个月前你在《设计与时尚》杂志得到了一分编辑的工作,但是现在却发现工作不适合自己,因此决定辞职。要求你向老板王先生写一封信,告诉他你决定辞职并说明原因以及做出道歉。
根据上面所提的辞职信写作“三步走”策略,具体操作如下:
首段:I am writing this letter to apologize that I plan to quit the position as an editor of your magazine for the reason of myself.
在辞职信中,“三步走”策略中的第一步是要表明写信目的,即提出辞职。用到的英语句型自然是应该更为委婉的。此外,还须在后面简要陈述原因。
中段:During the span of working here, I have been deeply impressed by the kindness and diligence of all colleagues. But meanwhile I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more peaceful and slow life. I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not really like.
在辞职信中,表明了目的之后,接下来第二段的主要内容就是向对方解释具体原因了。但是在解释原因之前,为礼貌委婉起见我们还须对一直以来的工作表示肯定与表扬,以更能获得对方的理解。
尾段:So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit. Please accept my apology.
本段中,紧接前面内容,解释完原因后,重申自己的写信目的。其次,自己辞职给公司带来了不便,因此按照题目要求还须进行道歉,期待对方的原谅。
在考研英语的书信表达中,类似的首段或尾段的套用句式比较丰富,大家需要在复习过程中进行有意的积累,并在写作中加以运用:
\1. I am writing to inform you about my decision to resign from my…
\2. By this letter I am resigning my position as …
\3. I have accepted an offer by another firm and have decided to tender my resignation.
\4. Please accept my sincere gratitude, as well as my regret for not being able to serve here any longer.
\5. Please feel free to contact me at any time if I can be of further assistance in helping with a smooth transition.
因此,该题的完整范文如下:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am writing this letter to apologize that I plan to quit the position as an editor of your magazine for the reason of myself.
During the span of working here, I have been deeply impressed by the kindness and diligence of all colleagues. But meanwhile I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more peaceful and slow life. I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not really like.
So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit. Please accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
2.投诉信(0次)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a member of the Cultural Exchange Club in University of Liverpool.(2) I do not usually complain, but (主题词) which really upset me deserves a complaint.
My discontent basically comes from these two following causes.(4) To start with, due to (第一个投诉的理由),a great deal of inconvenience has been caused to me.(5) Additionally, all my emails that I attempted to send to your customer service center have been returned undelivered.(6) The issues mentioned above must receive adequate attention and a proper solution. 上述问题必须得到充分重视和妥善解决。
Your precious time spent on my letter is greatly appreciated.(8) Your reply at earliest convenience would be merrily accepted.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
中文翻译
Dear Sir/Madam,
段落一
(1) 我是利物浦大学文化交流俱乐部的成员之一。(2) 我通常不会投诉,但让我十分生气的(主题词)应该得到投诉。
段落二
(3) 我的不满主要是由以下两个原因造成的。(4) 首先,(第一个投诉的理由),这引起了我极大的不便。(5) 另外,我尝试发送给你们客服中心的所有邮件都被退回了。(6) 上述问题必须得到充分重视和妥善解决。
段落三
(7) 您能花时间阅读这封信,我感激不尽。(8) 如果能收到您的及时回复,我将十分开心。
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
大作文
规律总结
1、考题集中于较大的一般性话题
历年考试主要涉及一些一般性话题(general topics)。如爱心(2001)、成长(2003)、代沟(1992)、友谊(1994)、家庭(2005)、承诺(1998)、崇拜(2006)、健康(1996)、资源利用(2000)、文化交流(2002)、乐观心态是成功的关键(2007)、合作的重要性(2008)、网络的“近”与“远”、文化融合(2010)、旅途之“余”(2011)、乐观面对生活(2012)、作出选择(2013)等话题。
命题中的图片和图表往往是单个或局部情况,但如果仅围绕个别现象,分析就没有了深度,往往要追溯到总体情况。如2006年考题图画中英国球星Beckham的发型,也要升华到对普遍的偶像崇拜(idol worship)现象的评价,而非仅仅针对Beckham个人。命题从来不在个别事件、具体环节或细枝末节上做文章,决不会细到介绍北京经济适用房建设情况或点评《满城尽带黄金价》。
2、内容贴近日常生活和简单社会常识
考题要顾及到全国考生的知识水平,不同专业考生的知识共性,不可能考察太专业或太偏的话题。所以内容以个人生活体验为主,如爱心、成长、友谊、养老、健康等等;稍微复杂一点的话题如环保、保护野生动物、文化交流也只需要考生大致地通过常识进行判断、分析和点评,点到为止就可以,关键要在语言的精确度和精彩度上下工夫。
大作文写作时间只有30-40分钟,不可能像论文一样挖掘详细的数据、考证具体年代地点或提出标新立异的思想。2000年“世界商业捕鱼简史”命题有点难度,但考生无须关注商业捕鱼的历史变迁和具体现状,不用借助数据或案例,只对两张图片中鱼群的多少进行大致对比,并指出人类过度开发资源的问题就到位了。160~200字的字数限制也只能让考生分析到一般深度。
3、考生的观点态度要走经过设计的“主流”路线
图画作文和图表作文的主旨好像是个谜语,命题人已经把自己的观点倾向浓缩到了图片中,通过图画图表来使主旨模糊化,需要考生在5分钟内审题,进行常识判断并加以破解。主旨往往具有positive的倾向,考生需要在图画寓意中发现哲理或是思考问题的积极解决方案。绝不可能向国外考试那样,学生可以通过脑筋急转弯给出另类的观点。在构思的时候往往要走“主流”路线,才能提供符合命题人思路的正确观点,从而顺利得分。
4、命题不会涉及时事政治或敏感话题
正是因为日常生活话题容易判断是非,所以考官尽量通过主旨浓缩来让考生进行猜谜。
5、命题中的“和谐社会”倾向
在以上分析的基础上,我们重新审视历年考题的命题,发现以中老年教授组成的命题团队普遍趋向常规主流观点。那么考题围绕着时代背景和主流思想,已经逐渐形成了以“和谐社会"”核心的命题思路。只不过总体以和谐作为公式的话题可以分成和谐的三个不同层次:
注意:以上考过的真题不能放弃,还需要再复习,爱心和助人为乐的话题曾在1995和2001年出现过两次,随着时间推移,某些大型普遍话题,如环保、健康、父母子女沟通今后难免重复。
个体和谐发展:自信的重要性、节俭与浪费、如何看待成功、梦想与现实、抄袭(plagiarism)与诚信、职业选择和规划;
个人、他人与社会的和谐共处:个性与团队合作、如何看待竞争、网络的利弊、伪劣商品问题(fake commodities-商家为牟利而危害社会)、乱收费问题、如何看待中国传统节日和洋节;
人类与自然环境的和谐:环境污染话题(空气、水、噪音、土壤、人类食品)、乱砍滥伐问题、人类对历史古迹的破坏及保护。
历年真题
(2020)
从内容上来讲,今年的英语一大作文依然延续2019年的出题思路,考查了品质类话题的图画作文,而不同的地方在于2019年是一幅图,但今年却是两幅图相反。从难度上来说,今年和去年持平,对于“习惯”的英语表达,相信大家都不陌生是“habit”。
写作时,按照一般顺序。第一段图画描述段,左图是位女孩正在非常努力地做着学校作业,心里想着是“尽早完成才放心”,右图是位男孩躺在沙发上也不看书,书桌上只有一本摊开的书和一支笔,心里却想着“不到最后不动手”,这两幅所反映的内容正好相反,它所反映的寓意依然是合理自洽即可,小编认为两者的不同在于习惯,女孩有很好的规划能力并有效利用时间完成任务,而男孩则恰恰相反,空耗时间只待最后“速成”,结果自然不会理想,因而我们需要养成合理规划时间的好习惯;第二段是寓意阐释段,按照品质类的框架结构,即关键句和具体作用, 可以说scheduling有助于我们充分利用时间以达到学业乃至事业上的成功,还可以讲acquire the habit of time management有助于我们克服拖延,做时间的主人;第三段是个人评论段,框架结构是关键句+具体建议+结尾句,可以说我们需要加强人们对此种品质的意识,希望人人都可以拥有这种美好的品质。
另外,注意大作文的评分侧重点。考研大纲指出:B节作文的评分侧重点在于信息点的完整、内容组织的连贯、语言的准确性、语言的多样性。字迹工整,少涂抹痕迹也很关键哦。
下面附加范文以供小可爱们参考。
【参考范文】
Portrayed distinctively by the two cartoons above is an impressive scene: a girl in the left picture is doing homework and saying that early completion is better. Nevertheless, the boy in the right picture is sitting in front of the desk and saying that he will not finish the homework until the last minute.
Undoubtedly, the symbolic implication of the pictures is to show us that importance should be attached to the formation of good habits, especially the good habit of time management.On the one hand, efficient time management is critical to personal development.As the old saying goes,“Time is money," and in the fast-paced modern life, it seems that we always have a lot of things to do and we are very busy. In the face of such a situation, we have to realize that efficiency holds the key to saving time and time management skills hold the key to personal success. On the other hand,good time management habits play a vital role in the development of the whole society.There is no doubt that, to a large extent, social progress is closely related to the efforts of each individual. If we can develop the good habit of time management,we are much more likely to improve efficiency and have a better performance in the learming and working process, which is an integral part of social advances and prosperity.
From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that the sense of efficient time management skills is of equal importance in personal and social progress.Therefore,we ought to take advantage of the phenomenon to enlighten the public and the press is expected to take a lead in advertising the value of developing good time management habits.Only in this way can we have a bright future.
[参考译文]
上面两幅漫画所描绘的是-个令人印象深刻的画面:左图中的一个女孩正在做作业,她说早完成比较好。然而,右图中的男孩正坐在书桌前,说他要到最后一分钟才 会完成。
毫无疑问,这两幅图的象征意义是:我们应该重视好习惯的养成,尤其是时间管理方面的好习惯。一方面,高效的时间管理对个人发展至关重要。俗话说,“时间就是金钱”,在快节奏的现代生活中,我们似乎总是有很多事情要做,很忙。面对这种情况,我们必须认识到,效率是节省时间的关键,而且时间管理技能是个人成功的关键。另一方面,良好的时间管理习惯对整个社会的发展起着至关重要的作用。毋庸置疑,社会进步在很大程度上与每个人的努力密切相关。如果我们能养成良好的时间管理习惯,我们就更有可能提高效率,在学习和工作过程中有更好的表现,这是社会进步和繁荣发展不可分割的一部分。
综上所述,可得出如下结论:高效的时间管理对于个人和社会的进步同等重要。因此,我们应该利用这一现象来启发公众,而媒体应该带头宣传养成良好的时间管理习惯的价值。只有这样,我们才能拥有一个光明的未来。
(2019)
What emerges into our eyes is that there are two young men standing on the stairs of the mountain. The most impressive element is that in the right place crouches a seemingly exhausted adult with a depressed look and a few words,such as “I am tired and I want to give up.”while in the left counterpart stands an energetic adult,who is smiling to his company and passionately encouraging him to continue with the words “Don’t do that and we will reach the end with a simple rest”.
In the real life, there is no one who can achieve the remarkable success in whatever he does without persistence. I can come up with no better illustration than the example of Thomas Edison, a distinguished scientist, who contributes his success to endless pursuing news goals. Just as he puts it, “Without continuous insistence of the conduct of experiments, I will not be so fortunate to have such a successful performance.” Apart from the example of Edison, many other great figures in the history also attributed their success to continuous pursuing something more meaningful in their lives.
Therefore, as a qualified young people living in modern society, I value persistence as a vital principle in my lives and I am determined to insist on this point in daily life and make full use of the positive effect achieved by persistence.
(2018)
As is depicted by the picture, a student is selecting courses. He is considering whether to choose the courses which are high scored, easily passed with less homework, or to choose those that contain new knowledge, focus on creating and are difficult to learn. From my perspective, I will choose the latter ones. The reasons are as follows.
The college students are faced with fierce competition in nowadays. Those courses which are full of advanced knowledge can broaden our horizon and enrich our knowledge. More over, they pay more attention to creativity so that I can be equipped with novel viewpoints in the future when seeking a job, which can help me become more competitive among the peers. Last but not least, to learn those courses which are difficult can give me a sense of accomplishment.
We young people are the hope of our country, and we must study hard to become the future star of our country!
(2017)
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As is vividly depicted in the picture, in the first picture there are a lot of books besides a boy, but he doesn’t read any of them. By contrast, the second one portrays that another boy makes a plan of reading: 20 books one year. In fact, the phenomenon in the picture doesn’t surprise us at all. Simple as it is, the intended meaning of the picture is worth our reflecting.
Undoubtedly, the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the significance of reading and knowledge . At the top of the list, we should attach importance to reading mainly due to that it can enable us to ameliorate ourselves so we can be qualified for future career promotion, and be ready for meeting the forthcoming challenges. What’s more, we ought to place a high value on the role played by knowledge in personal growth. Put it another way, in this ever-changing world, knowledge accumulation is to personal growth what water is to fish. To sum up, if reading and knowledge miss our attention in any possible way, we will suffer a great loss beyond imagination.
Hence, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the above picture. For one thing, we should frequently use it to enlighten the young. For another, we should cultivate the awareness of teenagers that reading is very vital. Only by doing so, can we become winner in the face of difficulties.
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正如图画所形象描述,在第一幅图中,有许多书在一个男孩身边,但是他却没有读任何一本书。相比之下,第二幅图描写了另外一个男孩制定了阅读计划:每天20本书。事实上,我们对图画中的现象毫不惊讶。虽然图画很简单,但是图画的含义值得深思。
毫无疑问,图画的作者旨在提醒我们读书和知识的重要性。首先,我们应该重视读书,主要是因为读书可以让我们完善自身,这样我们未来才有资格得到职业生涯的进步,才能做好准备迎接以后的挑战。另外,我们也应该重视知识在个人成长方面的作用。在这个多变的时代,知识积累对于个人成长就像水对于鱼一样重要。换言之,如果我们以任何可能的形式无视读书和知识,我们将遭受非常巨大的损失。
因此,从以上图画中得出积极的含义非常重要。一方面,我们应该经常用它来启迪年轻人。另外一方面,我们应该培养青少年重视阅读的意识。只有这样,我们才能成为困难面前的赢家。
(2016)
As is vividly depicted in the first picture there is a father watching TV and asking his son to study hard, with his son being unable to concentrate on his study. The second picture portrays that the son and the father are studying hard together. At the lower part of the picture is a caption which implies that it is wise for parents to set a good example for their children by action rather than by words.
It occurs to me that the author of the drawing aims at reminding us of the the value of a good example by parents. First and foremost, examples speak louder than words, for it is widely accepted that an example enables each person to transform his or her aspirations from a state of potentiality into reality. Put it another way, parents’ example enables their children to improve them selves, so they can be qualified for the future job, be ready for the forthcoming life, and they are likely to achieve more fulfillment. Furthermore, according to a latest survey conducted by an authority on the Internet, the majority of people interviewed answer that parents’ action produces more positive influence on the growth of their children than oral requirements do.
Hence, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from the above pictures. For one thing, we should frequently use it to enlighten young parents. For another, we should cultivate the awareness of parents that personal examples are very vital to kid’s growth. Only by doing so can children grow sound in body and mind.
(2015)
Here is a picture, interesting but with deep implication. As is vividly depicted in the photo, four persons are having dinner, which successfully captures our eyes. If we give it a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that they all focus on their phone and do not have communicate. Obviously, what the drawing has subtly conveyed should be given more concern.
What might account for this problem? Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the problem conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance. On the top of the list is that people are dependent too much on their mobile to communicate and ignore the face-to-face communication. There is the other point that no one can ignore. It is widely admitted that the young men have been get used to this kind of “invisible communication”, which may make them feel safe. On other case can better illustrate what I have analyzed than the picture above.
According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend. Of all the steps, to appeal to the media may be the most effective one, which can lead to the public to treat mobile phones in a reasonable way. Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.
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